Would you be willing to pay for internet services if they weren’t supported by ads? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t. Because I want to get more senses about marketing, and ads are good methods to do it.
Surely, I pay for youtube premium. It\'s because to see/listen to video while I close a phone.
Ads give me a good idea and source to make me inspired.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ian! Thank you for doing your homework. You were able to answer the question correctly. However, please be careful with word usage and sentence construction.
- Debbie
>> I wouldn\'t.
Because I want to get more senses about marketing, and ads are good methods to do it.
>> It is because I want to understand marketing more, and watching ads is one of the good methods to understand it.
Ads give me a good idea and source to make me inspired.
>> Ads give me good ideas and make me inspired.
Surely, I pay for youtube premium.
>> However, I pay for YouTube Premium.
It\'s because to see/listen to video while I close a phone.
>> It\'s because I listen to music while my phone is locked.
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