Would you commit a crime to save your family?

2014-01-17 · 첨삭 강사 Julie

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I don't like commit a crime. But if I have to save my family, I might committ a crime. I think being a criminal is better than my family fall into the danger. Because family is more improtant than me.

강사 첨삭

Hello!!

Blessed Friday!! Thank you so much for finding some time to complete your homework. You have good sentences but you just have to take note of your spellings.

Have a great day and I hope to talk to you soon.

Here are your corrections:

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I don\'t like commit a crime. But if I have to save my family, I might committ a crime.

>>I don\'t like to commit a crime, but if I have to save my family I might commit it.

I think being a criminal is better than my family fall into the danger. Because family is more improtant than me.

>> I think being a criminal is better than my family being in danger because my family is more important than myself.

>>OR: I think being a criminal is better rather than my family being in danger because my family is more important/vital/significant than myself.

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