Would you consider having cosmetic surgery? Why or why not?
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I never think about having cosmetic surgery before and probably I never will. It\'s not because I feel confidence about my face or I feel good about myself. I know that if I have some cosmetic surgery then probably I will be much more prettier as long as the surgery goes well but I\'m happy how I look and feel good about myself. Who knows that I change my mind later on but I don\'t consider having cosmetic surgery at this moment.
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I never think about having cosmetic surgery before and probably I never will.
>>>I never thought about having cosmetic surgery before and probably I never will.
It\'s not because I feel confidence about my face or I feel good about myself.
>>>It\'s not because I feel confident about my face or I feel good about myself.
I know that if I have some cosmetic surgeries, then probably I will be much more prettier as long as the surgery goes well, but I\'m happy how I look and feel good about myself.
>>>I know that if I have some cosmetic surgery then probably I will be much more prettier as long as the surgery goes well but I\'m happy with how I look and feel good about myself.
Who knows that I change my mind later on but I don\'t consider having cosmetic surgery at this moment.
>>> Who knows if I change my mind later on, but I don\'t consider having cosmetic surgery at this moment.
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