Would you consider living in a beautiful island with a perfect view than in a high-end city? Explain
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I think I wouldn\'t consider living on an island.
Because I like cities because there is lots of store near our house and I like the view in there too.
So I think it would be better to live in cities.
But I wish I can visit the islands once or twice in a year because I can really rest my eyes. And swim at the beach.
So I think I would not like to live on an island but I\'d like to visit :)
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Would you consider living in a beautiful island with a perfect view than in a high-end city? Explain
I think I wouldn\'t consider living on an island.
>>> CORRECT
Because I like cities because there is lots of store near our house and I like the view in there too.
>>> First, I like cities because there are lots of store near our house and I like the view there too.
So I think it would be better to live in cities.
>>> CORRECT
But I wish I can visit the islands once or twice in a year because I can really rest my eyes. And swim at the beach.
>>> But I wish I can visit any island once or twice in a year because I can really rest my eyes and swim at the beach.
So I think I would not like to live on an island but I\'d like to visit
>>> So I think I will not like to live on an island but I\'d like to visit.
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