Would you describe yourself as a workaholic? What do you like most about your job?

2014-09-15 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I am not a workaholic although I am a hard worker. To be labeled as a workaholic, you have to work more than 20 hours a day and 7 days a week. When I was younger than now, I used to work overtime and spend a night at the office without going home. Now, compared with those real workaholics, I am a bit lazy. Actually I am not able to work as such now because my body is not strong enough to stand such hard working conditions anymore. I cannot concentrate, neither can get a good result when working 24 hours without breaks. However, once I start a new task, I still work hard and put in my all-out effort to complete it on time because I cannot stand that the things remain undone.I’m a responsible and reliable worker when I self-assess myself although others could perceive me differently. I’m too much of a perfectionist. I like researching, analyzing and planning someting although I am a bit passive in executing the plans. Developing a plan needs insights and broad knowledge, but it's fun.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon Sir [이름]^^ I admire you for always working hard. I know that your job is sometimes tough but you can handle it with ease. Thank you for always sending me great essays. Keep it up! Let us improve your skills more. More vocabularies, better sentences in the future. Talk to you soon. Teacher Nina   I am not a workaholic although I am a hard worker. >> CORRECT To be labeled as a workaholic, you have to work more than 20 hours a day and 7 days a week. >> CORRECT When I was younger than now, I used to work overtime and spend a night at the office without going home. >> CORRECT Now, compared with those real workaholics, I am a bit lazy. >> CORRECT Actually I am not able to work as such now because my body is not strong enough to stand such hard working conditions anymore. >> CORRECT I cannot concentrate, neither can get a good result when working 24 hours without breaks. >> CORRECT However, once I start a new task, I still work hard and put in my all-out effort to complete it on time because I cannot stand that the things remain undone. >> CORRECT >> OR: However, once I start a new task, I give out my best and complete it on time because I can\'t stand that there are things unfinished. I’m a responsible and reliable worker when I self-assess myself although others could perceive me differently. >> CORRECT >> OR: I\'m a responsible and reliable worker when I assess myself although other perceive me differently. I’m too much of a perfectionist. I >> CORRECT   like researching, analyzing and planning someting although I am a bit passive in executing the plans. >> CORRECT Developing a plan needs insights and broad knowledge, but it\'s fun. >> CORRECT

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