Would you describe yourself as an argumentative person?
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I am not sure whether having a short-temper and being argumentative could be considered the same issue or they are at least related with each other.
>> I am not sure whether being a short-tempered person and being argumentative could be considered the same issue or they are at least related with each other.
Thinking about myself, I can fairly say that I am not an argumentative person although it depends on a situation.
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>> I can say that I am not an argumentative person. I could be that kind of person but it depends on the situation.
When I think it is not fair, I am willing to take trouble jumping into an argumentation.
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However, I do not usually initiate a battle for trivial things.
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I get upset so easily because I am short-tempered.
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I need to learn how to stay calm under very a tense situation.
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In order to be a good debater and win the argumentation, the most important thing is that you do not lose your control even when you are not harshly criticized.
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>> In order to be good at a debate, you shouldn\'t lose your control even when you are not harshly criticized and you should listen to what the other party is saying.
Having an argumentation, we often raise our voice and become irrational, which lead to eventually offense and insult the other party.
>> Did you mean: We often raise our voice and become irrational during an argument, which lead to insult the other the other party.
>> We often raise our voice and become irrational during an argumentation, which might lead to insult and be offensive to the other party.
Having a constructive debate and exchanging ideas or thoughts are fascinating.
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However, being selfish with pursing a self-interest is annoying and hurt other’s feelings.
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