Would you ever consider adopting a kid if given the chance (in the future)?
학생이 쓴 원문
If I have an opportunity that I can adopt a kid in the future, I would be willing to do that for the following reasons. That\'s because these days there are reliable shelters professionally responsible for adopting children. So, If I have difficulty giving a birth to a child for some physiological reasons such as infertility, I might well get help from these shelters. Compared to the past, it is true that the awareness of adopting has changed in more positive way a lot. In addition, I believe that foster parents can raise their adopted children as well as their biological parents by heart. So, if I am qualified for raising children economically or mentally when I want to adopt children in the future, I would like to consider adopting a kid.
강사 첨삭
Thank you [이름] [이름]. It would definitely be a noble act to provide an orphaned child with a home.
- T. Beth
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If I have an opportunity that I can adopt a kid in the future, I would be willing to do that for the following reasons. >>>> OR: If I have an opportunity where I can adopt a kid in the future, I would be willing to do that for the following reasons.
That\'s because these days there are reliable shelters professionally responsible for adopting children.
>>>> correct
So, If I have difficulty giving a birth to a child for some physiological reasons such as infertility, I might well get help from these shelters.
>>>> So, If I have difficulty giving birth to a child for some physiological reasons such as infertility, I might as well get help from these shelters.
Compared to the past, it is true that the awareness of adopting has changed in more positive way a lot.
>>>> OR: Compared to the past, it is true that the awareness of adopting has changed a lot in a more positive way.
In addition, I believe that foster parents can raise their adopted children as well as their biological parents by heart.
>>>> correct
>>>> OR: In addition, I believe that foster parents, just like the biological parents, can raise their adopted children by heart.
So, if I am qualified for raising children economically or mentally when I want to adopt children in the future, I would like to consider adopting a kid.
>>>> correct
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