Would you ever give away or sell your collection? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think I don\'t want to give away or sell someone. But My friends or siblings want My collection,
I can give them It\'s not all one or two.
My collections are made me memories and when I use them I always think \"where did I buy? \"
\"what did I feel?\" It was a precious memory.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ju Mi! You\'re collections are definitely your treasures. ^^ Thank you for doing your homework. Have a fun day today.
~T. Jewel
I think I don\'t want to give away or sell someone.
>>I think I don\'t want to give away or sell anything to anyone.
But My friends or siblings want My collection,
>>But if my friends or siblings want any of my collection, I can give it to them.
It\'s not all one or two.
>>But not all of it, only one or two items.
My collections are made me memories
My collections are made me memories
>>My collections hold memories for me.
and when I use them I always think \"where did I buy? \" \"what did I feel?\"
>>When I use them, I always think, \'Where did I buy this?\' and \'What did I feel?
It was a precious memory.
>>CORRECT
OR
>>It was such a precious memory.
>>It was such a precious memory.
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