Would you ever "take a bullet" for someone else?

2012-09-12 · 첨삭 강사 Michelle

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About 3 months ago, When I was working in my office, My boss called me. At that time, something happened in my branch. Frankly speaking, team leader and other team member struggled each other in the branch. But my boss heard that situation was caused to me. He understood that I shout our member. He told me why are you so angry to the person. Be careful. I got an underserved scolding from him. Before long my team leader and team colleage made peace with each other. That’s why I was happy. And then 2 days later, After worked, I also told my boss that times situation. So my boss understood. And he told that sorry to you.

강사 첨삭

Hi Kwan Seok, good evening! Thank you for finding time to do your homework. It is nice to know that the misunderstanding you had with your boss was clarified. It is nice to be at peace with everyone. I think you did right. However, to take a bullet means to purposely receive a gunshot that was intended for another. I really appreciate the effort your putting into your studies. Have a great evening! ^^

T. Michelle ^^

About 3 months ago, When I was working in my office, My boss called me.
>>> About 3 months ago, while I was working in my office my boss called me.
At that time, something happened in my branch.

>>> Correct

Frankly speaking, team leader and other team member struggled each other in the branch.

>>> Frankly speaking, the team leader and one of the team member struggled against each other in the branch.

But my boss heard that situation was caused to me.

>>> But my boss heard that the situation was caused by me.
He understood that I shout our member.

>>> He understood that I shouted to our member.

He told me why are you so angry to the person. Be careful.

>>> He asked me, \"Why are you so angry to the person? Be careful\".

>>> OR: He asked me why I was angry to the person and told me to be careful.

I got an underserved scolding from him.

>>> Correct
Before long my team leader and team colleage made peace with each other.

>>> Correct

That’s why I was happy.

>>> Correct

And then 2 days later, After worked, I also told my boss that times situation.

>>> And then two days later, after worked I told my boss of that situation.

So my boss understood.

>>> Correct

And he told that sorry to you.

>>> And he told me that he is sorry.

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