Would you feel motivated or discouraged if you work hard and do well but receive more work instead o
학생이 쓴 원문
I think process is more important than outcome. I\'m not frustrated when they receive more work or don\'t give any feedback as a result. It\'s gonna be good be faithful to one\'s role. I will get reasonable answer or feedback sometime or other.
강사 첨삭
Hey there, Ji Yun. Great job! You’ve significantly expanded your vocabulary. You’re able to use a range of words in different contexts, which makes your writing more dynamic. Your ideas are clear in writing but there are some minor issues with sentence variety and grammar. I appreciate your feedback on the homework. Feel free to reach out if you have any questions. ~Teacher Jane :)
I think process is more important than outcome.
>> I think the process is more important than the outcome.
I\'m not frustrated when they receive more work or don\'t give any feedback as a result.
>> I\'m not frustrated when I receive more work or if they don\'t give any feedback as a result.
It\'s gonna be good be faithful to one\'s role.
>> It is good to be faithful to one\'s role.
I will get reasonable answer or feedback sometime or other.
>> Sometimes I get reasonable answers or feedback.
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