Would you go back in time ? Why?

2020-06-19 · 첨삭 강사 Jasper

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Dear [Name], I always go back earlier than I thought. Because I finish my work early. I have a spear time whenever I work. I am a Korean. They always work hard and have a very industrious character. Within short time, I can do a lot of things. And I go back early at home.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]~
Thanks for doing your homework.

Here are your corrections:

Dear [Name],

I always go back earlier than I thought.
Because I finish my work early.

>> I always go home as early as possible because I finish my work early.

I have a spear time whenever I work.

>> I always have a spare time whenever I work.

I am a Korean.

>> CORRECT

They always work hard and have a very industrious character.

>> CORRECT

Within short time, I can do a lot of things.

>> Within a short time, I can do a lot of things.

And I go back early at home.

>> Then, I go back home early.

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