Would you have a part-time job in the future to get extra money while you study?
학생이 쓴 원문
Umm... No, I won\'t have a part-time job. It\'s because I want to focus on to study. If I need a little money, I will say to mom that help me.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ridoria! I think, your parents would also not want you to get a part-time job. No parent would want his or her child to struggle in life.
-T. Sonny
Umm... No, I won\'t have a part-time job.
>>Correct!
It\'s because I want to focus on to study.
>>It\'s because I want to focus on studying.
If I need a little money, I will say to mom that help me.
>>If I needed some money, I would say to my mom so that she could help me.
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