Would you like a computer to control your house for you?

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Yes, there are benefits for using electronics, but let\'s not maximize the use of it as it would also inflict bad effects like the ones you\'ve mentioned in your composition. Keep it up!

~Teacher Eunice

I would say No, because I do\'t want computer manage my life, I would like to control everything by myself.

>>> I would say no, because I don\'t want computers manage my life, I would like to control everything by myself.

There are a lot of electric home appliances which be controlled through WIFI signal.

>>> There are a lot of electric home appliances which can be controlled through WIFI signal.

I don\'t feel any convenience using it.

>>> correct!

It just make people lazy and we have to be living in the electromagnetic environments.

>>> It just make people lazy and we have to be living in the electromagnetic environment.  

We could see what happen at home though real time camera that installed in living room or places we would like to install by their smartphone application.

>>> We can see what\'s happening at home though the real time camera which is installed in the living room or other places by the use of our smartphone application.  

We can also operate the washing machine, air purifier, gas stove, light on the ceiling and all home appliances. 

>>> correct!

I don\'t think I can live without smart phone, but I miss a lot of thing from the past like a paper letter.
>>>  I don\'t think I can live without smart phone, but I miss a lot of things from the past like writing a letter.

It looks more romantic than sending e-mail.

>>> It looks more romantic than sending an e-mail.

I remembered that I was waiting letter from the woman who I liked.

>>> I remembered that I was waiting a letter from the woman who I liked.

I felt excited when I was waiting it.

>>> I felt excited when I was waiting for it.  

I feel a little bit shame about our life recently.

>>> correct!

We don\'t want to wait for something, we would like to find the information without any thinking.

>>> We don\'t want to wait for something, we would like to find the information without making an effort.