Would you like it to be spring forever?
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I think spring is a good season to hang out with family. Spring weather makes people feel good because it is warm. But, if all seasons are spring, it will be a big problem. It will greatly affect the reproductive cycle of flowers and animals. It is best to have four seasons with an appropriate cycle.
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Thank you so much for answering your homework.
We know seasons occur because to the revolutions made by the earth; if there was only one season, then it would have effected many semi-arid regions by temperatures; it would even impact crops.
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I think spring is a good season to hang out with family.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: In my opinion, the spring is a great time to spend time with family.
Spring weather makes people feel good because it is warm. But, if all seasons are spring, it will be a big problem.
>>> Spring weather makes people feel good because it is warm, but if spring is the only season, it will be a big problem.
It will greatly affect the reproductive cycle of flowers and animals.
>>> It will greatly affect the reproductive cycles of flowers and animals.
>>> OR: The reproductive cycles of both flowers and animals will be significantly impacted.
It is best to have four seasons with an appropriate cycle.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: The ideal season cycle consists of four distinct seasons.
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