Would you like to attend a World Cup in the future?

2022-11-30 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Absolutely, I want see a World Cup in direct. However I don\'t want attend a World Cup as player. It\'s very pressure. Actually I don\'t have skill.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!
Thank you for sharing your thoughts about attending a World Cup in the future. It would be exciting to watch games in person.
~Kelly^^
Absolutely, I want see a World Cup in direct.
>> Absolutely, I want see the World Cup in person.
However I don\'t want attend a World Cup as player.
>> However I don\'t want to attend the World Cup as a player.
It\'s very pressure.
>> The pressure is high.
Actually I don\'t have skill.
>> Actually I don\'t have any skills.

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