Would you like to be a model? What do you think a model’s life is like?
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No, don\'t because the model will be hard.
Like the model needs to wake up early and she are he needs to wear some party? are beutyflul clothes.
강사 첨삭
Hi Isabel!
I hope we can put in more effort in our studies.
I know that we have come a long way but there is always room for improvement.
Good luck! ^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
No, don\'t because the model will be hard.
>> No, I don\'t because a model\'s life can be hard
Like the model needs to wake up early and she are he needs to wear some party? are beutyflul clothes.
Like the model needs to wake up early and she are he needs to wear some party? are beutyflul clothes.
>> A model needs to wake up early and look for beautiful clothes to wear to parties.
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