Would you like to be different?
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I don\'t want to be defferent with others.
I think I am affected by Korean cultures that hesitate to get attention and want to be a normal.
Sometimes people regard a man with strong personality as a wierdo.
Actually I want to be a person who have strong personality, but It\'s not easy to me.
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I don\'t want to be defferent with others.
>> I don\'t want to be different from others.
>> I don\'t want to be different from others.
I think I am affected by Korean cultures that hesitate to get attention and want to be a normal.
>> I think I am affected by the Korean culture that hesitates to get attention and want to be normal.
>> I think I am affected by the Korean culture that hesitates to get attention and want to be normal.
Sometimes people regard a man with strong personality as a wierdo.
>> Sometimes people regard a man with strong personality as a weirdo.
>> Sometimes people regard a man with strong personality as a weirdo.
Actually I want to be a person who have strong personality, but It\'s not easy to me.
>> Actually, I want to be a person who has a strong personality but it\'s not easy for me.
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