Would you like to be famous? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t want to be famous.
Because I think happiness has nothing to do with being famous.
I\'v always done my best in what I do and the results have come out as much as I\'ve tried.
That is why I can be happy without being famous.
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I don\'t want to be famous.
>> CORRECT
>> CORRECT
Because I think happiness has nothing to do with being famous.
>> I think happiness has nothing to do with being famous.
>> I think happiness has nothing to do with being famous.
I\'v always done my best in what I do and the results have come out as much as I\'ve tried.
>> I\'ve always done my best in what I do and the results have come out as much as I\'ve tried.
>> I\'ve always done my best in what I do and the results have come out as much as I\'ve tried.
That is why I can be happy without being famous.
>> CORRECT
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