Would you like to be famous? Why?

2020-02-03 · 첨삭 강사 Avery

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I would like to be famous in my field. Because to be famous will bring many benefits such as money, honor etc. If I am famous, I will hold my lecture and share my feets(?:D). I like the sentence that \"Tiger will leave their leather when he (or it?) die, People will leave their names!\" I guess that you maybe know I took my interview for exchange student program last Thursday. I think I did my best... Although I could\'t tell all of that I prepared because I was so nervous, the fact that It finished made me comfortable. The result of that can know next week. I really hope I can participate in the program. Anyway, My interview was done. Therefore I want to change my book to study English that can use in daily. Please recommend other course! If the book that I am studying fits (to me) properly, I will keep my book. The book that I was recommended at first is senior lower intermediate 1.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]! Thank you for your homework. I\'m excited to hear how your interview went. Tell me about it more in class. ^^

Regarding your book, I think Senior Lower Intermediate 1 will be ok for you. I will try to change your book later.

If not, let\'s try to change it during our next class. Enjoy your Monday. See you soon! ^_^

~T.Avery

I would like to be famous in my field. Because to be famous will bring many benefits such as money, honor etc.

>> I would like to be famous in my field because being famous brings many benefits such as money, honor, etc.
If I am famous, I will hold my lecture and share my feets(?:D).

>> If I become famous, I will have my own lectures and share my experiences. (What do you mean by \"feets\"? ^_^)

I like the sentence that \"Tiger will leave their leather when he (or it?) die, People will leave their names!\"

>> I like the saying that goes \"A tiger will leave its leather when it dies. People will leave their names!\"
I guess that you maybe know I took my interview for exchange student program last Thursday.

>> I guess you know that I took my interview for exchange student program last Thursday.
I think I did my best...

>> CORRECT

Although I could\'t tell all of that I prepared because I was so nervous, the fact that It finished made me comfortable.

>> Although I couldn\'t say all of what I prepared for because I was so nervous, the fact that it is finished made me comfortable.
The result of that can know next week.

>> The result of that can be known next week.

OR>> The results will be announced next week.

I really hope I can participate in the program.

>> CORRECT
Anyway, My interview was done.

>> CORRECT

Therefore I want to change my book to study English that can use in daily.

>> Therefore, I want to change my book to study English which can be used daily.
Please recommend other course!

>> CORRECT

If the book that I am studying fits (to me) properly, I will keep my book.

>> If the book that I am studying fits me properly, I will keep my book.
The book that I was recommended at first is senior lower intermediate 1.

>> CORRECT

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