Would you like to be famous? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]! Thank you for your homework. I\'m excited to hear how your interview went. Tell me about it more in class. ^^
Regarding your book, I think Senior Lower Intermediate 1 will be ok for you. I will try to change your book later.
If not, let\'s try to change it during our next class. Enjoy your Monday. See you soon! ^_^
~T.Avery
I would like to be famous in my field. Because to be famous will bring many benefits such as money, honor etc.
>> I would like to be famous in my field because being famous brings many benefits such as money, honor, etc.
If I am famous, I will hold my lecture and share my feets(?:D).
>> If I become famous, I will have my own lectures and share my experiences. (What do you mean by \"feets\"? ^_^)
I like the sentence that \"Tiger will leave their leather when he (or it?) die, People will leave their names!\"
>> I like the saying that goes \"A tiger will leave its leather when it dies. People will leave their names!\"
I guess that you maybe know I took my interview for exchange student program last Thursday.
>> I guess you know that I took my interview for exchange student program last Thursday.
I think I did my best...
>> CORRECT
Although I could\'t tell all of that I prepared because I was so nervous, the fact that It finished made me comfortable.
>> Although I couldn\'t say all of what I prepared for because I was so nervous, the fact that it is finished made me comfortable.
The result of that can know next week.
>> The result of that can be known next week.
OR>> The results will be announced next week.
I really hope I can participate in the program.
>> CORRECT
Anyway, My interview was done.
>> CORRECT
Therefore I want to change my book to study English that can use in daily.
>> Therefore, I want to change my book to study English which can be used daily.
Please recommend other course!
>> CORRECT
If the book that I am studying fits (to me) properly, I will keep my book.
>> If the book that I am studying fits me properly, I will keep my book.
The book that I was recommended at first is senior lower intermediate 1.
>> CORRECT
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