Would you like to change your career someday? Why? If not, why so?
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I would change my career someday.
Because, the company requires to take another tasks and jobs to employee.
Actually, I changed my career in detail.
I worked at accountant division, but I work at shareholders division right now.
It is similar, but it is a change.
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I would change my career someday.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I would love to change my career someday.
Because, the company requires to take another tasks and jobs to employee.
>> Because the company that I am working for right now requires me to do other tasks and jobs from another employee.
Actually, I changed my career in detail.
>> Actually, I consider my current job as a new career for me.
I worked at accountant division, but I work at shareholders division right now.
It is similar, but it is a change.
>> Even though, I applied in the accounting department, my boss required me to work at the shareholder\'s division.
>> It might be similar but it\'s a new thing for me.
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