Would you like to change your daily routine? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
I wouldn\'t like to change my daily routine. Even though it\'s not easy to live, I\'m satisfied with my daily routine. I remember my busy daily routine in the last year. I did so many things. As a result, I was too exhausted. I really wanted to take some rest. At the end of last year, I started to get sick because of a bad cold. I couldn\'t do anything as different as the previous year. I tried to pray for recovery. But my lousy cold wasn\'t easy to recover from. I tried to keep praying and take some rest for recovery. While I was praying and taking rest, my daily routine was changed. When I had a hard time coughing, I felt very frustrated. Because It was very slow going toward my goals. However, God made my life very simply what I wanted through my hard time. Now I can focus on taking care of my girl and study counseling and English. If I wouldn\'t get sick, I couldn\'t stop my busy life by myself. Because I\'m a very hard worker for everything. God knows me well. Thank you, Faith! :)
강사 첨삭
It is good that you see the silver lining of your situation, Jane! Your faith in God is strong.-Faith-
I wouldn\'t like to change my daily routine. >> CORRECT
OR I would not like to change my daily routine.
Even though it\'s not easy to live, I\'m satisfied with my daily routine.
>> CORRECT
OR Even though it is not easy to live, I am satisfied with my daily routine.
I remember my busy daily routine in the last year.
>> I remember my busy daily routine last year.
I did so many things.
>> CORRECT
OR I had a lot on my plate.
As a result, I was too exhausted.
>> CORRECT
I really wanted to take some rest.
>> CORRECT
At the end of last year, I started to get sick because of a bad cold.
>> CORRECT
I couldn\'t do anything as different as the previous year.
>> I could not do anything different as the previous year.
I tried to pray for recovery.
>> CORRECT
But my lousy cold wasn\'t easy to recover from.
>> However, my lousy cold was not easy to cure.
I tried to keep praying and take some rest for recovery.
>> CORRECT
While I was praying and taking rest, my daily routine was changed.
>> CORRECT
When I had a hard time coughing, I felt very frustrated. Because It was very slow going toward my goals.
>> When I had a hard time coughing, I felt very frustrated because It was very slow going toward my goals.
However, God made my life very simply what I wanted through my hard time.
>> However, God made my life very simple which I wanted through my hard time.
Now I can focus on taking care of my girl and study counseling and English.
>> CORRECT
If I wouldn\'t get sick, I couldn\'t stop my busy life by myself. Because I\'m a very hard worker for everything.
>> If I could not get sick, I would not stop my busy life by myself because I am a very hard worker for everything.
God knows me well.
>> CORRECT
Thank you, Faith! :)
>> CORRECT
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