Would you like to design your own home?
학생이 쓴 원문
Definitely!
I have just one year that I lived apart from my family.
So whenever I lived alone in the U.S, I decided to decorate my own home in the future.
After graduation, I will live alone abroad and I hope to design and decorate my house!
I love buying monotonous furniture which colors are just black or white.
Also, I hope to have my own garden in front of my house with some trees or flowers!
I really love gardening!
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] Ha! I can sense that you are trully excited about designing your own home in the future. I\'m sure that it\'s going to be lovely. I\'m excited for you!~~T.Dee
Definitely!
>>CORRECT!
I have just one year that I lived apart from my family. So whenever I lived alone in the U.S, I decided to decorate my own home in the future.
>>I had one year when I lived apart from my family it was when I lived alone in the U.S. Since then, I decided to decorate my own home in the future.
After graduation, I will live alone abroad and I hope to design and decorate my house!
>>CORRECT!
I love buying monotonous furniture which colors are just black or white.
>>I love buying neutral colored furniture like black or white.
Also, I hope to have my own garden in front of my house with some trees or flowers!
>>CORRECT!
I really love gardening!
>>CORRECT!
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