Would you like to go and live in another country? Where and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes. I \'d like to live in America or Canada. Because I want to feel America\'s vibe. I like to their scenery and relationships. And I heard there is better than Korea to live. So if I can live there, I want to live in America or Canada.
강사 첨삭
Hello Daisy!
WOW! I think those places are wonderful. I hope you can live there soon when you\'re already stable. ^_^
~Teacher Erin
Yes. I\'d like to live in America or Canada.
>>CORRECT
Because I want to feel America\'s vibe.
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I like to their scenery and relationships.
>>I like the scenery and the relationships.
And I heard there is better than Korea to live.
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So if I can live there, I want to live in America or Canada.
>>CORRECT
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