Would you like to improve the transportation facilities in your city?
학생이 쓴 원문
There is a subway station near my house, but there are not many buses.
It\'s inconvenient to go somewhere I can\'t go by subway.
If there are more buses, I can go to more places freely.
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There is a subway station near my house, but there are not many buses.
>> CORRECT!
It\'s inconvenient to go somewhere I can\'t go by subway.
>> It\'s inconvenient to go somewhere where I can\'t go by subway.
If there are more buses, I can go to more places freely.
>> CORRECT!
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