Would you like to learn how to fly a plane? Why? Why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
I just want to learn how to fly, but I don’t want to fly a plane. I would just learn the knowledge in terms of flying. Because I know how I am when I drive a car, I’m afraid of piloting a plane. I enjoy the high speed while I’m driving. As this reason, I don’t drive a car even though I got a driving license. If I fly a plane, I will want to feel the speed like driving a car. I think it would be dangerous. Therefore, I just want to study the knowledge about flying.
강사 첨삭
Oh my [이름]!
That is very dangerous. You should never do that when driving :)
I would not ride with you then - hahaha.
I just want to learn how to fly, but I don’t want to fly a plane.
>>> CORRECT!
I would just learn the knowledge in terms of flying.
>>> I would just learn the knowledge about flying.
Because I know how I am when I drive a car, I’m afraid of piloting a plane.
>>> I\'m afraid of flying because I know how I feel when I drive.
I enjoy the high speed while I’m driving.
>>> CORRECT!
As this reason, I don’t drive a car even though I got a driving license.
>>> For this reason, I don\'t drive even though I got a driver\'s license.
If I fly a plane, I will want to feel the speed like driving a car.
>>> CORRECT!
I think it would be dangerous.
>>> CORRECT!
Therefore, I just want to study the knowledge about flying.
>>> CORRECT!
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