Would you like to learn how to fly a plane? Why? Why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
If possible, I wanna learn how to fly a plane.
When I watched TV program about it, I wanna learn how to drive a plane.
Looking down on the ground from a flying airplane seems to be the best feeling.
The ground seen from the sky is so beautiful.
I like to drive my car. I think it would be fun to drive an airplan.
It would be nice to be able to go wherever I want to go if I could drive an airplan myself.
In the future, if I can get an opportunity to learn how to drive an airplane, I will try it.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jennifer!
I think that is absolutely fantastic!
If possible, I wanna learn how to fly a plane.
>>> CORRECT!
When I watched TV program about it, I wanna learn how to drive a plane.
>>> CORRECT!
Looking down on the ground from a flying airplane seems to be the best feeling.
>>> CORRECT!
The ground seen from the sky is so beautiful.
>>> CORRECT!
I like to drive my car.
>>> CORRECT!
I think it would be fun to drive an airplan.
>>> I think it would be fun to drive an airplane.
It would be nice to be able to go wherever I want to go if I could drive an airplan myself.
>>> It would be nice to be able to go wherever I want to go if I could drive an airplane myself.
In the future, if I can get an opportunity to learn how to drive an airplane, I will try it.
>>> CORRECT!
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