Would you like to live an a farm an grow vegetables? Explain your answer?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes I am, I want to grow vegetables an farm because vegetables is very tasty.
So I want to grow my vegetables.
강사 첨삭
Here\'s your first corrected composition, Jimmy. Please take a look at the corrections below.
Cheers,
Jean~~
Would you be willing to move Japan? Why?
I don\'t move to Japan because Japan is many attacks my country I\'m very hate Japan.
So I don\'t want to move Japan.
>>> I don’t want to move to Japan because my country has experienced many attacks from Japan, and I feel strongly against it.
>>> OR: My country has faced difficult times because of Japan, and that’s why I’m reluctant to move there.
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