Would you like to live in a city inside a building? why / why not?
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I would like to live in a city inside a building. Because that\'s convenient. There are so many transportation in a city and convenient stores too. Although I don\'t like living with crowded people I think convenient things are the better merit.
I dont\'s express what I\'m thinking. Because I\'m not good at speaking English. So, this is the end. Thank you ;)
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I would like to live in a city inside a building.
>>CORRECT
Because that\'s convenient. There are so many transportation in a city and convenient stores too.
>>CORRECT
Although I don\'t like living with crowded people I think convenient things are the better merit.
>>CORRECT
I dont\'s express what I\'m thinking.
>>I don\'t usually express what I\'m thinking.
Because I\'m not good at speaking English. So, this is the end. Thank you ;)
>>CORRECT
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