Would you like to live in a large city or small town. Please expain why.
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I prefer to live in a large city. There are two reasons why I supports this view. First, In my personal experience, A large city has a lots of shop such as laundry shop, clothes shop, supermarket, and so on. For example, I need to buy very small something. If this shop is long distance from my house, I don`t like go to buy this item. Second, I want to meet with many people in a large city. For this reason, the large city is suitable for me.
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I prefer to live in a large city.
>>CORRECT!
There are two reasons why I supports this view.
>>There are two reasons that may support my answer.^^
First, In my personal experience, A large city has a lots of shop such as laundry shop, clothes shop, supermarket, and so on.
>>First, it is because of my personal experience. A large city has a lot of shops such as laundry shops, clothes\' shops, supermarket, and etc.
For example, I need to buy very small something. If this shop is long distance from my house, I don`t like go to buy this item.
>>For example, I need to buy some few things and if this shop is far from my house, I won\'t go there to buy it or that item.^^
Second, I want to meet with many people in a large city. For this reason, the large city is suitable for me.
>>Second, I want to meet a lot of people in a large city. For these reasons, a large city is suitable for me.^^
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