Would you like to live in another country? Where?

2020-01-29 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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If I could another country, I\'d like to live in France. I felt a charming country when I went to there for honeymoon. There are many old landmakrs, various people and very delicious food. If I could get a chance, I\'d like to learn baking In fact, I don\'t like some breads. But when I went there, I love it whatever I ate any breads As I know, France\'s flours are digestible. In the case of my cousin, he doen\'t come back in Korea since he went there in 1990 for studying abroad. He is a professor in Paris now. He said he is living a content life in Paris and has no idea of returning to Korea.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! Thank you for this. Paris is indeed a beautiful place. I have always dreamed of visiting there someday too.

- T. Beth

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If I could another country, I\'d like to live in France.

>>> If I could live in another country, I\'d like to live in France.

I felt a charming country when I went to there for honeymoon.

>>> I felt it was a charming country when I went there for honeymoon.

There are many old landmarks, various people and very delicious food.

>>> correct
If I could get a chance, I\'d like to learn baking.

>>> correct
In fact, I don\'t like some breads.

>>> correct

But when I went there, I love it whatever I ate any breads

>>> But when I went there, I loved every bread I had eaten.

As I know, France\'s flours are digestible.

>>> From what I heard, France\'s flours are easily digested.
In the case of my cousin, he doen\'t come back in Korea since he went there in 1990 for studying abroad.

>>> In the case of my cousin, he didn\'t come back to Korea since he went there in 1990 for studying abroad.
He is a professor in Paris now.

>>> correct
He said he is living a content life in Paris and has no idea of returning to Korea.

>>> He said he is living a contented life in Paris and has no plans on returning to Korea anytime soon.

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