Would you like to travel into outer space? Why or why not?
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Space travel is very good because it is very funny and beautiful.
The most interesting thing in space is there are not an air. America spaceship and Russia spaceship are boom! but it is not noise.
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Space travel is very good because it is very funny and beautiful.
>> Space travel is very good because it is very fun and beautiful.
The most interesting thing in space is there are not an air.
>> The most interesting thing in space is there is no oxygen.
America spaceship and Russia spaceship are boom! but it is not noise.
>> America and Russia\'s spaceships exploded but they didn\'t make any noise.
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