Would you like to travel to other countries alone somday?
학생이 쓴 원문
In fact, I don\'t want to travel alone to other countrys.
It\'s because if we swim alone, it\'s board.
And if we play game alone, It will be board too.
That\'s why I don\'t want to travel to the other countrys, But there are many reasons I don\'t want to travel alone.
I want to travel with many friends.
These are the I don\'t want to travel alone to other countrys.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Always do your best.
~ T. Camille
In fact, I don\'t want to travel alone to other countrys.
>> In fact, I don\'t want to travel alone to other countries.
It\'s because if we swim alone, it\'s board.
>> It\'s because if we go swimming alone, it\'s boring.
And if we play game alone, It will be board too.
>> And if we play games alone, it will be boring, too.
That\'s why I don\'t want to travel to the other countrys, But there are many reasons I don\'t want to travel alone.
>> That\'s why I don\'t want to travel to other countries, but there are many reasons why I don\'t want to travel alone.
I want to travel with many friends.
>> I want to travel with most of my friends.
These are the I don\'t want to travel alone to other countrys.
>> These are the reasons why I don\'t want to travel alone to other countries.
[ PLEASE BE CAREFUL OF THE SPELLINGS. THANK YOU. ~ T. Camille ]
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