Would you like to visit Sahara desert?
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No, I don\'t want to visit Sahara desert.
I don\'t want to visit Sahara desert because it\'s very hot.
If I will go to the Sahara desert, I think I will melt.
And do you want to go to the Sahara desert?
These are the reason why I don\'t want to visit to that hot and large desert.
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No, I don\'t want to visit Sahara desert.
>> No, I don\'t want to visit the Sahara desert.
I don\'t want to visit the Sahara desert because it\'s very hot.
>> CORRECT!
If I will go to the Sahara desert, I think I will melt.
>> CORRECT!
And do you want to go to the Sahara desert?
>> CORRECT!
These are the reason why I don\'t want to visit to that hot and large desert.
>> These are the reasons why I don\'t want to visit that hot and large desert.
OR >> These are the reasons why I don\'t want to visit that large hot desert.
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