Would you like to work with someone who doesn\'t listen to your opinions at all? Explain.

2020-11-17 · 첨삭 강사 Annie

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I don\'t think I will ever want to :( Because I have already experienced that. When I was in Korea, there was this kinda rich kid who wanted to do everything in the way she wanted. So when we were suggesting our opinions she was talking with her friend, who is in ANOTHER table about how she bought an expensive tablet. After we were done, she said she will make it and she just wrote what she thought and we were so embarrassed. I don\'t need to experience that twice ;/

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Hello [이름],

  Thank you for taking time to answer this question. It only proves that you really wanted to improve in your English skill. Please do check and take note of the corrections for your improvement. I hope it helped you. 

Keep up the good work! 

Sincerely,
Teacher Annie (^^)


Would you like to work with someone who doesn\'t listen to your opinions at all? Explain.

I don\'t think I will ever want to :(
Because I have already experienced that.
>>> I don\'t think I will ever want to because I have already experienced that situation. 

When I was in Korea, there was this kinda rich kid who wanted to do everything in the way she wanted.
>>> When I was in Korea, there was this rich kid who wants to do everything in the way she wants it to be done.

So when we were suggesting our opinions she was talking with her friend, who is in ANOTHER table about how she bought an expensive tablet.
>>> So when we were suggesting our opinions she is busy talking with her friend who is at another table about how she bought an expensive tablet.

After we were done, she said she will make it and she just wrote what she thought and we were so embarrassed.
>>> When our discussion is done, she said she will make it and she just wrote her own thoughts and we were all so embarrassed.

I don\'t need to experience that twice ;/
>>> I don\'t need to experience that twice. 

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