Would you like your country to pursue closer ties with the US? Please explain your answer.
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Question: Would you like your country to pursue closer ties with the US? Please explain your answer.
we don\'t need to persue ties with US any more.
>> We don\'t need to keep our relationship with the United States anymore.
Currently, we have a military alliance with the U.S. and we are paying a large amount of money directly and indirectly to the U.S.
>>We are now paying a lot of money directly or indirectly to the United States in return for our military alliance.
And every year, the US have increased the cost of U.S. troops stationed every year.
>>And the United States has increased the cost of U.S. military presence every year.
It\'s almost 1bil.$.
>>It\'s almost a 1 billion dollars.
Our country is paying much more than other countries.
>>CORRECT!
Many U.S. soldiers do not have to stay in South Korea if the relationship with North Korea improves.
>>Many American soldiers do not have to stay in South Korea if the relationship of my country and North Korea improves.
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