Would you like your name to be put in the Walk of Fame?
학생이 쓴 원문
No. It\'s because I am not a celebrity. And I don\'t want many people\'s attentions. Even so, if I were a singer or an actress, I will not put my name in the Walk of Fame. Becoming a famous person is tired.
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Hi, Daisy. Thank you so much for answering your homework. Keep striving to be the best. I know you can do it! See you in class! ^^
-T. Julia
No. It\'s because I am not a celebrity.
>> Correct
And I don\'t want many people\'s attentions.
>> And I don\'t want many people\'s attention
Even so, if I were a singer or an actress, I will not put my name in the Walk of Fame.
>>Even so, if I were a singer or an actress, I would not put my name on the Walk of Fame.
Becoming a famous person is tired.
>> Becoming a famous person is tiring.
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