Would you opt for a relaxing weekend or an active one? Why?

2024-12-16 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

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Well, I think I\'ll make a different choice depending on the situation and how I felt at the time. I think I\'m a complex person. Because I\'m an extrovert, but I\'m also a person who likes to watch dramas and movies at home. On normal days, choose a comfortable weekend. This is because I\'m stressed out because I have been suffering from hard work at work, so I refrain from going outside. That\'s why I will choose to have a comfortable weekend at home. However, when you feel like doing outside acivities or want to go outside, I choose active weekends. This is usually the case when you go shopping, eat out, or go out because I have an appointment. I choose to go outside even when I feel like I want to go on a trip together.

강사 첨삭

Thanks, [이름], for sharing your answer. 
It was nice to know that you have a very diverse way of spending your weekend depending on the situation. ^^ 

~ Teacher Gina

Well, I think I\'ll make a different choice depending on the situation and how I felt at the time.
>> CORRECT.
I think I\'m a complex person.
Because I\'m an extrovert, but I\'m also a person who likes to watch dramas and movies at home.
>> I think I\'m a complex person because I\'m an extrovert, but I also enjoy watching dramas and movies at home.
On normal days, choose a comfortable weekend.
>> On normal days, I choose a comfortable weekend. 
This is because I\'m stressed out because I have been suffering from hard work at work, so I refrain from going outside.
>> This is because I feel stressed from the hard work at my job, so I tend to avoid going outside.
That\'s why I will choose to have a comfortable weekend at home.
>> CORRECT.
However, when you feel like doing outside acivities or want to go outside, I choose active weekends.
>> However, when you feel like doing outside activities or want to go outside, I choose active weekends.
This is usually the case when you go shopping, eat out, or go out because I have an appointment.
>> This is usually the case when I shop, eat out, or have an appointment.
I choose to go outside even when I feel like I want to go on a trip together.
>> I choose to go outside, even when I feel like staying in, because I want to enjoy a trip together with others.

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