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In many countries, there is a controversy over which is right for the government to raise or lower taxes for companies and indivisuals. Many countries encounter strong resistance for raising the taxes. The opposition for raising taxes seems to be stemmed from two main reasons: transparency and fairness. In many cases, we do not have an idea where tax payers’ money is used. Is our money used properly and in a discreet manner? Is there any waste? The second issue is whether others pay taxes just like me. For most employees, our wallet is transparent and cannot hide our income. Thus the government withdraws taxes from our income every month. Whereas many high income self-employed people or conglomerates have been evading taxes by hiding their income or by establishing a company in a tax haven. We often here about tax related corruptions. When it is ensured that our money is used at a right place and for a right people, we would be more cooperative in paying higher taxes.
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Hi there^^
Wow! What impressive ideas you have there.^^
I agree with you and for some reason this is a big issue for most countries to think that taxes should be used
for the development of our countries. It has become a tool to create disaster between citizens and the government.
Mind your verb tenses and plurals. Keep expressing your ideas.
Take care and have a good day ^^
t. Nina^^
Here are some of my corrections for you:
In many countries, there is a controversy over which is right for the government to raise or lower taxes for companies and indivisuals.
>> In many countries, there is a controversy over the government\'s right to raise or lower taxes for companies and individuals.
Many countries encounter strong resistance for raising the taxes.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: A lot of countries strongly resist the raising of taxes.
The opposition for raising taxes seems to be stemmed from two main reasons: transparency and fairness.
>> The opposition for raising taxes seemed to stem out from two main reasons: transparency and fairness.
In many cases, we do not have an idea where tax payers’ money is used.
>> In many cases, we do not have an idea where tax payers\' money are being used.
Is our money used properly and in a discreet manner? Is there any waste?
>> Is our money being used properly and in a discreet manner? Is there any waste?
The second issue is whether others pay taxes just like me.
>> CORRECT
> OR: I wonder if others pay taxes just like me.
For most employees, our wallet is transparent and cannot hide our income.
>> For most employees, our wallets are transparent and cannot hide our income.
Thus the government withdraws taxes from our income every month.
>> CORRECT
>OR: Thus, the government deducts taxes from our monthly income.
Whereas many high income self-employed people or conglomerates have been evading taxes by hiding their income or by establishing a company in a tax haven.
>> Whereas, many high income self-employed people or conglomerates had been evading taxes by hiding their incomes or by establishing a company in a tax haven.
We often here about tax related corruptions. When it is ensured that our money is used at a right place and for a right people, we would be more cooperative in paying higher taxes.
>> We often hear about tax related corruptions. When it is ensured that our money is used at a right place and for the right people, we would be more cooperative in paying higher taxes.
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