Would you prefer living in the countryside? or city? and why?
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If I choose either the countryside or the city, I would choose the city because I would like to enjoy many public facilities such as bing swimming pools, nice restaurants, and movie theaters.
>> If I choose either the countryside or the city, I would choose the city. Because, I would like to enjoy a lot of public facilities such as, a swimming pools, nice restaurants, and movie theaters.
When I want to enjoy the countryside I can buy a cheap villa by earning more money in the city.
>> I want to enjoy the countryside when I can buy a cheap villa by earning more money in the city.
Finally, the public transport system such as a bus, subway, and Taxi is also the reason for what I would like to live in the city.
>> Finally, the public transport system such as a bus, subway, and the Taxis are also the reason for what I would like to live in the city.
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