Would you prefer to have a flower garden or a vegetable garden? Why? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
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I would rather have a vegetable garden than have a flower garden. Because I can take fresh vegetable anytime if it grow completely.
My father has a small farm in my home town. He plants various seeds such as water melon, chilly, corn, and lettuce. Having a farm gives children a lot of exciting experience. My father always calls me to come his farm whenever it is time to harvest crops. My children have a great time in the farm during picking fruits or vegetable out.
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I would rather have a vegetable garden than have a flower garden.
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Because I can take fresh vegetable anytime if it grow completely.
>>> Because I can take fresh vegetables anytime it grows ripe.
My father has a small farm in my home town.
>>> CORRECT =) (British English)
OR >>> My father has a small farm in my hometown. (American English)
He plants various seeds such as water melon, chilly, corn, and lettuce.
>>> He plants various seeds such as watermelon, chilly, corn, and lettuce.
Having a farm gives children a lot of exciting experience.
>>> Having a farm gives children a lot of exciting experiences.
My father always calls me to come his farm whenever it is time to harvest crops.
>>> My father always calls me to come to his farm whenever it is time to harvest crops.
My children have a great time in the farm during picking fruits or vegetable out.
>>> My children have a great time on the farm while picking fruits or harvesting vegetables.
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