Would you prefer to hear bad news first or good news? Why?
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I think I would rather hear the bad news first.
Because firstly, I know that I will hear it so after I am sad, I can get happy c: And change my mood.
And also for bad news that is IMPORTANT, I can be ready for them.
So sometimes telling bad news is safe since you can prepare.
So... I think hearing and news is better but it\'s never good to have nasty surprises :c
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Would you prefer to hear bad news first or good news? Why?
I think I would rather hear the bad news first.
>>> CORRECT
Because firstly, I know that I will hear it so after I am sad, I can get happy c: And change my mood.
>>> First, It\'s better to hear the bad news first because after feeling sad, the good news will make your mood change to happy.
And also for bad news that is IMPORTANT, I can be ready for them.
>>> Also, some bad news are important so hearing it first can make you ready.
So sometimes telling bad news is safe since you can prepare.
>>> So sometimes hearing the bad news first is safe for you to prepare.
So... I think hearing and news is better but it\'s never good to have nasty surprises.
>>> In conclusion, I think hearing the bad news first is better but never good to have nasty surprises.
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