Would you prefer to live in a house or an apartment

2023-02-28 · 첨삭 강사 Mika

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I live in a house I prefer to live an apartment Because it\'s safe and convenient There\'s a gym and major bath and library in the apartment

강사 첨삭

Hi Kay! I\'m so glad to have been your teacher. I\'ve watched you learn and grow and change from day to day. I hope that all the things I\'ve done, have helped in some small way! With love and wishes. 

I live in a house
>> I live in a house.
I prefer to live an apartment
>> But I prefer to live in an apartment.
Because it\'s safe and convenient
>> CORRECT.
There\'s a gym and major bath and library in the apartment
>>There\'s a gym, public bath, and a library in an apartment.

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