Would you prefer to live in a house or an apartment? Why?
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Of course, a house that I want to live has a yard and terrace. I can raise a dog, my children can run around and grill meat too. And I wish there will be an attic in a house. I want to see the stars there. :)
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Hi Elic! I\'m so glad to have been your teacher. I\'ve watched you learn and grow and change from day to day. I hope that all the things I\'ve done, have helped in some small way! With love and wishes.
Of course, a house that I want to live has a yard and terrace.
>> Of course I want to live in a house that has a yard and a terrace.
I can raise a dog, my children can run around and grill meat too.
>> If I have a spacious yard, my children can run around and I can also do some grilling too.
And I wish there will be an attic in a house. I want to see the stars there. :)
>> Lastly, I want to my house to have an attic. I want to see the stars from there. :)
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