Would you prefer to live in a really old historical city, or a really new modern city? Why?
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I live in a place with a long history.
It is the place where \'Yu Gwan-soon\' campaigned for independence when the Republic of Korea was under Japanese colonial rule on March 1, 1919.
However, with the recent construction of modern architecture, it has lost its historical significance.
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Hi, Gina!
Thank you for sending me a picture of your place. I agree, some historical places lose their significance because of modernization. Still, you did great and were able to make correct sentences. Keep it up.
-T. Caitlyn
I live in a place with a long history.
>> CORRECT
It is the place where \'Yu Gwan-soon\' campaigned for independence when the Republic of Korea was under Japanese colonial rule on March 1, 1919.
It is the place where \'Yu Gwan-soon\' campaigned for independence when the Republic of Korea was under Japanese colonial rule on March 1, 1919.
>> CORRECT
However, with the recent construction of modern architecture, it has lost its historical significance.
However, with the recent construction of modern architecture, it has lost its historical significance.
>> CORRECT
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