Would you prefer to live in a really old historical city, or a really new modern city?
학생이 쓴 원문
I prefer to live modern city because of convenience.
First, public transportation is very important for me because I don’t have a car.
Modern city is built everything by plan. Public transportation also run by plan. So, it is more convenient than really old historical city.
Also, modern city have many convenience store, super market. So, we don’t need to go far to buy for groceries.
I am already used to convenient city. So, I prefer to live modern city.
강사 첨삭
Hi Se [이름]!
Here are the corrections.
I prefer to live modern city because of convenience.
>>I prefer to live in a modern city because of convenience.
First, public transportation is very important for me because I don’t have a car.
>>Correct!
Modern city is built everything by plan. Public transportation also run by plan. So, it is more convenient than really old historical city.
>>A modern city is built everything by plan. Public transportation also run by plan. So, it is more convenient than a really old historical city.
Also, modern city have many convenience store, super market. So, we don’t need to go far to buy for groceries.
>>Also, a modern city has many convenience stores and super markets. So, we don’t need to go far to buy groceries.
I am already used to convenient city. So, I prefer to live modern city.
>>I am already used to a convenient city. So, I prefer to live in a modern city.
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