Would you prefer to study in a classroom or take an online course?

2015-03-24 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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For a decades ago, most students took their classes in a classroom, but these days an online course has become popular. Some people like to taking a lesson in a classroom, while others want to take a class by using computer. In my case, I prefer to study in a classroom. There are some reasons for this. Firstly, I have an opporutnity to improve my communication skill. In a classroom, there are many friends taking the same lecture. During the lecture, we can get along with each other by discussing some problem. Besides, during the break time, we can talk about our common interests. Secondly, I can deeply learn about the lecture. Unlike online course, I can ask a teacher the question on what I don't know. And sometimes teacher tell us extra story that is not written in the textbook. If I take an online course, I cannot ask a teacher a question whenever I want to and I will learn about only content of the textbook. For these two reasons, I prefer to study in a classroom.

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss. [Name]! Thank you for accomlishing your homework right away despite your bad condition. These days, there are many methods that we can use in order to learn. Anyway, please go over my corrections. Thank you! ~Kelly^^ For a decades ago, most students took their classes in a classroom, but these days an online course has become popular. >> A decade ago, most students took their classes in a classroom, but these days an online course has become popular. Some people like to taking a lesson in a classroom, while others want to take a class by using computer. >> Some people like to take a lesson in a classroom, while others want to to have a class online. In my case, I prefer to study in a classroom. >> Correct. There are some reasons for this. >> Correct.Firstly, I have an opporutnity to improve my communication skill. >> Correct. *** opportunity In a classroom, there are many friends taking the same lecture. >> Correct. During the lecture, we can get along with each other by discussing some problem. >> During a lecture, we can get along with each other by discussing some problems. Besides, during the break time, we can talk about our common interests. >> Besides that, during break time, we can talk about our common interests.Secondly, I can deeply learn about the lecture. >> Correct. Unlike online course, I can ask a teacher the question on what I don\'t know. >> Unlike online courses, I can ask a teacher on what I don\'t know. And sometimes teacher tell us extra story that is not written in the textbook. >> And sometimes, teachers tell us other stories that are not written in the textbook. If I take an online course, I cannot ask a teacher a question whenever I want to and I will learn about only content of the textbook. >> If I take an online course, I cannot ask a teacher whenever I want to and I will only learn from the textbook.For these two reasons, I prefer to study in a classroom. >> Correct.

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