Would you prefer visiting big cities to the countryside? Why is that?
학생이 쓴 원문
I prefer visiting countryside for trip.
I usually go to the beach city during my vacation.
Because, I want to feel comfort.
Actually, it is tourist spot so it is not countryside anymore.
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Hi! I’m delighted you dedicated time to completing the homework. You did a wonderful job expressing your experiences—keep up the great effort!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^
I prefer visiting countryside for trip.
>> I prefer visiting the countryside for trips.
I usually go to the beach city during my vacation.
>> I usually go to a beach city during my vacation.
Because, I want to feel comfort.
>> Because I want to feel comfortable.
Actually, it is tourist spot so it is not countryside anymore.
>> Actually, it is a tourist spot, so it is not countryside anymore.
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