Would you put a lot of pressure on your kids to study hard? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
No, I will not put much pressure on my children to study hard. Because my children will have a hard time if I put pressure on them. Also, it is possible to commit suicide due to study stress. Therefore, I will tell you to study when you need to study without putting too much pressure and to rest when you need to rest.
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No, I will not put much pressure on my children to study hard.
>>> CORRECT!
Because my children will have a hard time if I put pressure on them.
>>> CORRECT!
Also, it is possible to commit suicide due to study stress.
>>> CORRECT!
Therefore, I will tell you to study when you need to study without putting too much pressure and to rest when you need to rest.
>>> CORRECT!
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