Would you rather attend a private school or public school?

2022-06-18 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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I\'d like to attend public school. If I want a special high school like an art high school or a science high school, I would go but If I don\'t want, I will not. Because public school can be eligible for state support and also the systems are better.

강사 첨삭

Hello Rachel!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I\'d like to attend public school. 

>> CORRECT!

If I want a special high school like an art high school or a science high school, I would go but If I don\'t want, I will not. 

>> If I want a special high school like an art high school or a science high school, I would go, but If I don\'t want to, then I will not. 

Because public school can be eligible for state support and also the systems are better.

>> Public schools can be eligible for state support and also, the systems are better.

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