Would you rather be a child, teenager or an adult? Why?

2017-09-15 · 첨삭 강사 Amanda

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I can`t choose Do I prefer be a child, an adult. Both of them have advantage and disadvantage. 1. Child has a lot of possibility. Child can be anyone. Child is a seed. No one know Is child be a lawyer, doctor, singer. Also Child can be thief, murderer, or dictator. Child has a lot of possibility. And I know Possibility does not always mean positive things. 2.Adult has a power to do something with responsibility. Adult can go club all night long. Adult can eat any food what adult wants to eat. Adult can go anywhere. But those does not mean positive things. Because Great power comes great responsibility.

강사 첨삭


Hi Lion,


Good evening!


Wow! Thank you for always doing your homework !

Your answers are interesting  and enlightening.

You didn\'t have a preference, however you were able to present  your views clearly about the advantages and disadvantages of being on both side of the equation.


See you!


Amanda :)




Would you rather be a child, teenager or an adult? Why?


I can`t choose Do I prefer be a child, an adult. Both of them have advantage and disadvantage.

>> There are advantages and disadvantages of being a child and an adult, so I can\'t really choose between the two.

1. Child has a lot of possibility. Child can be anyone. Child is a seed.

>> A child\'s future is unknown. Many things are possible to happen in his or her future.


No one know Is child be a lawyer, doctor, singer.

>> No one knows if the child will become a lawyer, a doctor, a singer, etc..


Also Child can be thief, murderer, or dictator. Child has a lot of possibility.
>> Also, the child might become a thief, a murderer, or a dictator.


And I know Possibility does not always mean positive things.

>>And I know that possibility does not always mean positive things.

>> Possibilities can be both be positive and negative.


 2. Adult has a power to do something with responsibility.

>> Adult has a power to do something but they have big responsibilities.

>>OR: Adults are capable of doing things, but they are also accountable for their actions.  


Adult can go club all night long. Adult can eat any food what adult wants to eat. Adult can go anywhere. But those does not mean positive things. Because Great power comes great responsibility.

>> Adults can go clubbing all night long. They can eat any food they want. They can also go anywhere they want. However, not everything that adults does yields positive results. They are held accountable for their actions which is why they should be responsible and cautious about the things that they do. As Spiderman said, \"with great power comes great responsibility\".




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